Bride Auction

I had a good time :D
I like the concepts, but I admit I am confused and would have liked more conclusion / resolve.
I think there's maybe too much vagueness and too many plots at once for its own good. I would have deserved more explanation at each end, or simpler motives for each character. (I think I have gotten all endings)
If interested, I can elaborate more on what I understood and didn't ^^

That said, the vibes were spot on, the dread is there, I had a good time. Thanks for making this !
PS : I'm hyped for the re-mastered version. Can only do so much within a game jam. With more time this project will surly become a great gem! 

Haven't finished yet, but I am loving this so far! It's very interesting plot wise, and while there are some minor mistakes/rough spots, it's so amazing how you managed to make this within a month! I think the quality is great, and I lowkey vibe with the sketchy and painterly style. I love Nayla and her expressions, and you also did a great job with choosing the soundtrack! Can't wait for the update. 

Don't know how to feel about this. The plot was confusing, the art was hard to make out, and there were a TON of typos. I still appreciate what it was trying to do, so hopefully it can get a remaster or something like that that'll clear some things up. I did enjoy the characters after all, especially Rhymond. :)

(PS: I am always happy to correct any typos and writing, if you need someone to do that!)

TBH theres so much i wanna say but I think one of my fave parts of this game was atmosphere. OMLLL??? The art + music + writing style had my heart in my gut every run!! I was literally on shazam for so long trying to find the music before I saw it in the description TT I am a little dumb dumb so im def getting my english major gf to play and get her thoughts but like wow. I love games that make me feel my spine out of despair 10/10

This is a good game. i lowkey thought it was short so i didnt download it, but i think im gonna download it now to fully play it. im invested, goodjob dev

the suspension is indescribable... i would be able to handle one round a day. mastery of storytelling.

i just got all the endings and WOW. THIS GAME IS AWESOME!!! i was instantly hooked and just on the edge of my seat the whole time. the writing is insanely immersive, i felt sick (in a good way lol) just reading about how nayla was being seen as a prize and how everyone treated her. i really liked how vague some of the story was, it was so fun trying to piece together the whole story. the entire cast is so charming too, nayla is def my favorite! i cant remember the last time i was so captivated by a vn protag

the art is gorgeous, i had to keep pausing my reading just to appreciate how good the art was lol the first person pov was a lot of fun as well!! im looking forward to seeing anything else you may make :]]

Just to make sure: when you say this is for "mature" audiences, do you mean 18+?

i know this may sound to much but...CAN SOMEONE PLS EXPLAIN THE PLOT AND ENDIGS?? "bro played the game with their eyes closed" "bro only cares about the love intrest" nah bro im just dumb (crying emoji) but anyways from the things i (somehow) picked up is that the mc is not the real nayla and that we are an copy? but like why did we replace the real one again? and why did the king like kill the real nayla and the mother? WHY DID WE HAVE TO EAT SOMEONE IN THAT ONE ENDING?? im absolutly cooked for this question, but who asked us th get 1000 varelins or some shit in order to forgive us? and for what did we need forgiveness again?

TLTR: im stupid and i need someone to tell me what the plot was i just played (crying emoji)

i desperately need this to be a serie or smth

my fanart of Xandr :)

I keep coming back to this game, you all should be really proud of what you've accomplished here! Can't wait for the walkthrough to the other routes, I NEED the auctioneer 

So incredibly interesting! Please take a moment to play. The world building is insane and I can't wait to play through the rest of the endings!

OMG the art style is insane! The use of classical music was such a delight, it really added so much weight to the atmosphere of the game. And the story hit me right in the heart — incredibly powerful.

P.S. Please release this game on Steam and sell it — art like this deserves to be paid for!

woaa def one of the more unique games out there, loved it!!

Hii I just played your game and really enjoyed my time!
I was a little confuse by the ending I got.. is this good or bad? XD 
it starts at 5:39:13

https://www.twitch.tv/videos/2580282925

But yes, really enjoyed the game! Probably will try for other routes also, am so curious about the other characters!

Is there a guide for this game? It's so beautiful.

I don't know how but you've managed to make every single character the most compelling of individuals, I couldn't even dislike a single one, they were all fascinating with their own unique voices. Loved the MC and the depths at which we delve within her psyche. The art is simply gorgeous, the characters designs each aiding to a better understanding of what kind of persons they are. I've only managed to get 2 endings for now (Xandr and neutral ending) but there's clearly more, I would recommend adding a feature to see which endings have been achieved as well as a Gallery feature (so I may stare at the art for longer hahah). Genuinely amazed at the quality of both art and writing, so many choices too! Thanks for this beautiful Visual Novel.

holy shit. i was at the edge of my seat the entire time playing this. i so badly want to know more about the world this story takes place in. i want to see what happens after the auction. truly a riveting visual novel. oh what i would give for an entire show about this game.